Learning to sew: Do you think the altered muslin fits better?

This picture isn't very crisp. Really. I do hope that you can tell ? despite the fuzziness ? if it fits better. Do I need to  make more changes? I followed your generous advice and took up the shoulders and the sides.

I am still not happy with the back bodice. What to do?

I think it looks better from the side. Much.

So. What do you think? Tell me. Please.